Adult Education is my next step.
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Jan 26, 2018 by
10:59pm
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Please write an essay explaining why Adult Education is your next step.
The essay needs to include a brief history of your situation including what lead to you deciding you need a GED or Adult High School Diploma today.
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Talks about the writer's personal experiences.
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You get to know and understand the writer's perspectives and choices leading them to choose to attend Adult Education.
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50
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I can relate to the writer.
We know the feelings and story of the individual who wrote the paper and what their motives are.
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30
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I know where the writer is coming from.
The writer remained guarded however revealed enough to understand his/her intents and motivations.
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0
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I typed what I thought you wanted.
The writer is trying to appeal to a teacher based on previous experiences not revealing anything about her/himself. The writer attempts to use cliche phrases and seems inauthentic.
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50 pts
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Organization
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The writer took the time to put in the effort to show the essay meant something to them. The paragraphs are separated and the essay is reasonably formatted.
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50
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Easy to read.
A few minor structural errors however overall easily readable. Possibly perfect in every way.
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30
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Not the easiest read.
It still flows well overall however it is hard to follow what is wanted or expected.
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0
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Wall of text.
We know there is a paper in there somewhere but it is playing Where's Waldo.
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50 pts
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Full Marks
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No Marks
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5 pts
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Total Points:
100
out of 100
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Total Points:
5
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